My favorite magazine from all women magazines is Marie Claire because of the quality and how it promotes important issues women deal with everyday. I prefer magazine the don’t give advice on how to get a man or the best diet because the truth is it doesn’t really work. However, Marie Claire does focus on health, fashion, celebrities, careers and relationships but it also talk about issues that are happening in the world. The targeted audience is career-educated women looking to read realistic ways to stay healthy and receive tips on fashion and beauty. Some women want too read about real women in the world that are making a difference. Because of this it’s what makes Marie Claire magazine different from others.
The writing style are short articles, interviews with celebrities, and how-to sections.
You need to proofread!
ReplyDelete* I prefer magazines that don’t give advice ...
* it also talks about issues ...
* Some women want to read ...
* This is what makes Marie Claire magazine different from others.
In the closing paragraph, you've listed information on the types/formats of articles, not the magazine's writing style.
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