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Leads Exercise #3
Amtrak train the "Colonial" collided with three Conrail diesels yesterday at 1:30 near Chase, Md. All trains were headed northbound when the Conrails ran a stop sign by the track merger, according to Larry Chase, Amtrak spokesman.
Good, except start with "The" - otherwise it sounds like a headline. 9.5/10
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