1) He hopes to make $ 1 billion dollars by the time he’s 40. Already he figures his net worth is between $2million and $3 million, depending on current stock prices.
2) Lt. Col. John Carpenter was a midshipman at the U.S. Naval Academy and served in the Seventh Fleet.
3) Twenty-one winners were named two days after the third annual Procrastination Awards Ceremony.
4) It was a one-sided game, and he was a poor loser. After losing the play off when his ball went out-of-bounds, he made an off-color remark that could be heard in the stands.
5) Hundreds of people attended Sunday’s race to watch 75 top bicyclists pedal across the finish line.
6) Every winter, the Joneses and the Kinney’s pour over travel brochures, planning their summer trip together. This year they’re hoping to go to Panama City, Panama.
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1) $1 billion or a billion dollars (-1)
ReplyDelete2) You caught the "midshipman" part, but there's no "Lt. Col." rank in the Navy. Review the "military titles" entry in the AP Stylebook. Also, 7th Fleet. (-2)
4) Only hyphenate "out of bounds" when it's used as an adjective. (-1)
6) the Kinneys (plural, not possessive), wrong "pour" (-1.5)
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