Favorite Magazine (late)

Most teenage girls and women are inclined to read magazines that focus on relationships, women’s health, sex, celebrities, fashion, and self-discovery. These magazines become a guide to helping our everyday lives or just a source of entertainment. In my case magazines such as vogue, People, Starz, Glamour , and Cosmo girl are my entertainment magazine.

My favorite magazine from all women magazines is Marie Claire because of the quality and how it promotes important issues women deal with everyday. I prefer magazine the don’t give advice on how to get a man or the best diet because the truth is it doesn’t really work. However, Marie Claire does focus on health, fashion, celebrities, careers and relationships but it also talk about issues that are happening in the world. The targeted audience is career-educated women looking to read realistic ways to stay healthy and receive tips on fashion and beauty. Some women want too read about real women in the world that are making a difference. Because of this it’s what makes Marie Claire magazine different from others.

The writing style are short articles, interviews with celebrities, and how-to sections.

http://www.marieclaire.com/

Broadcast Segment

PROTEST FOR HIGHER EDUCATION

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(ANCHOR ON CAM)
OVER SIX THOUSAND STUDENTS, TEACHERS AND ADMINISTRATORS THROUGHOUT CALIFORNIA CAME TO THE STATE CAPITAL THIS MORNING DEMANDING FUNDS FOR HIGHER EDUCATION.

(ANCHOR/VO)
THE MARCH BEGAN AT RALEY FIELD WITH THOUSANDS OF PEOPLE FOLLOWING THE PATH TOWARDS THE STATE CAPITOL CARRYING SIGNS THAT SAID “STOP BUDGET CUTS” AND CHANTING “SCHOOL NOT WAR.”

STUDENTS FROM DE ANZA COLLEGE IN CUPERTINO WORE RED SHIRTS THAT SAID “STUDENTS FOR JUSTICE” TRYING TO RAISE AN AWARNESS ON THE IMPORTANCE OF HIGHER EDUCATION.

WITH THE BUDGET CRISIS IN CALIFORNIA THE STATE LEGISLATORS ARE CUTTING MILLIONS OF DOLLARS TOWARDS EDUCATION…COMMUNITY COLLEGES ARE RAISING FEES AND CALIFORNIA STATE UNIVERSITIES ARE REDUCING THE ADMISSION OF FRESHMEN STUDENTS.

LT. GOV JOHN GARAMENDI, SPEAKER AT THE RALLY SUPPORTED THE PROTEST VOICING HOW STUDENT’S ARE A VALUBALE ASSET.

THE PEACEFUL PROTEST ENDED WITH STUDENTS ONLY HOPING FOR ECONOMIC CHANGE.
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Grizzly Bear at the Capitol

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VISITORS WHO COME TO THE CAPITOL WILL NOW GET TO SEE A GIANT BRONZE GRIZZLY BEAR BY THE GOVERNORS OFFICE.

GOV. ARNOLD SCHWARZENEGGER PURCHASED-WITH HIS OWN MONEY-THE STATUE IN
ASPEN, COLORADO AT AN ART GALLERY, WHILE ATTENDING A FUNDRAISER.


THE BEAR SITS IN FRONT OF THE GOVERNORS OFFICE...FAR ENOUGH FROM THE DOOR
TO ALLOW FOR WHEEL CHAIR ENTRANTS.

ACCORDING TO HIS SPOKESMAN HE SAID THE GOVERNOR THOUGHT THE STATUE
WOULD ATTRACT THE CHILDREN TOURING THE CAPITOL.
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Broadcast Style

30 SECONDS

NORTHWEST AIRLINES ANOUNCED TODAY THAT IT IS CUTTING IT'S DOMESTIC FARES BY UP TO 40-PERCENT FOR HOLIDAY TRAVELLERS.


THE C-E-O OF NORTHWEST THOUGHT THE PRICE CUT WOULD BE A HOLIDAY GIFT TO THEIR CUSTOMERS

TICKETS MUST BE PURCHASED BY FRIDAY FOR TRAVEL BETWEEN NOVEMBER 12 AND JANUARY 14 IN THE LOWER 48-STATES, ALASKA AND CANADA.

DISCOUNTS VARY DEPENDING ON TRAVEL DATES AND ARE NOT AVIALABLE ON CERTAIN POPULAR DAYS, INCLUDDING NOVEMBER 23, NOVEMBER 26, DECEMBER 23 AND DECEMBER 26.

WITH THE DISCOUNTED, NON-REFUNDIBLE FAIRES, A PASSENGER COULD TRAVEL ROUND-TRIP BETWEEN BOSTON AND SAN FRANCISCO FOR 400-DOLLARS ON CERTAIN DAYS.

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Soft broadcast lead

SQUIRREL CAUSES A RAILROAD TIE-UP

30 SECONDS

METRO-NORTH COMMUTERS WERE STRANDED IN MANHATTEN THIS

AFTERNOON WHEN SQUIRREL CLIMBED ONTO THE RAILROADS POWERLINES

CAUSING A POWER OUTTAGE.

THE POWERSURGE WEAKEND AN OVERHEAD BRACKET EXPOSING A WIRE…A

PASSING TRAIN CAUGHT THE DANGLED WIRE UNDERNEATH TEARING DOWN

ALLTHE LINES.

THE SQUIRELL WAS ELECTROCUTED AFTER CROSSING AROUND THE POWERLINES.

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Copy Edit the World #2

In the magazine BSD Vol 2. No. 1, the sentence says "One things that helps though is operating systems that aim to be secure by default like NetBSD." (pg42) The correct way to write this sentence is : One thing that helps is operating systems aim to be secure by default like NetBSD.









In the magazine BSD the sentence says " I went ahead and choose ksh (Korn Shell) during this instillation and you should as well those more experienced with Unix shells are free to choose a root shell of your preference." The correct way to write this sentence is" I went ahead and chose ksh (Korn Shell) during this instillation and you should as well those more experienced with Unix shells are free to choose a root shell of your preference."





In the magazine BSD the sentence said "Thief might have a lot of problems cracking your passwords and accessing your files." The correct way to write this sentence is " The thief might have a lot of problems cracking your passwords and accessing your files".




The quotation marks on ,,talk" is incorrect, it should be "talk".





Towards the end of the editors letter I saw a word that was awkward in the sentence last but nor least, is a great review of Dr Lavigne's The Best of FreeBSD" the best word to use is last but not least.




The sentence in the syllabus for LLD starts a sentence with a open parenthesis that does not close. After the sentence Plagiarism is a serious offense.( A general rule to avoid plagiarism : Any time you use anything (ideas, words, etc) from any source in any submitted work (test, paper, presentation etc." it's missing a close parenthesis.