Have you ever experienced a really bad day ? Join the club... A new online website has been added to the list of distractions to peoples everyday lives. Fmylife.com a website devoted to sharing peoples horrible experiences throughout the day is now a popular website that it even has its own application on the iPhone. People go on to read stories that are funny, sad and well deserved, possibly leaving a reaction that your life isn't so bad.
The commentary on the website mostly talks about relationship issues, sex encounters, friend issues and typical issue such as leaving your keys inside the car. The writing process is simple starting with describing your bad day experience and at the end of the message three words will appear "Fmylife."
Other than Facebook, Twitter, and Myspace as a source of entertainment and distraction Fmylife website could be therapeutic. Everyone goes on thinking that their day is the worst from all, but with that website it will give people the chance to see that they are not alone . Also a stress reliever to vent to the world why your day is the worst from all. With your story they will judge if you deserve it or not.
Can you please take a look at my copy edit of the world, I reposted the information because it did not post the first time. Thank you
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ReplyDelete* people's everyday lives (it's possessive; "people" is already plural)
* Fmylife.com, a website devoted to sharing people's horrible experiences throughout the day, is so popular website that it even has its own iPhone application. (punctuation, tighten it up)
* ...and typical issues such as ...
* ...is the worst of all (not "from all")
Fix this sentence fragment: Also a stress reliever to vent to the world why your day is the worst from all.
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