131 passengers aboard U.S Air flight from Chicago were killed yesterday when plane crashed outside Pittsburgh making this the worst U.S air disaster in the past three years.
Fact error -- the plane was coming from Chicago, not heading into Chicago.
Also, what makes this story news is not just that a plane crashed, but that all 131 people on board were killed. So that information needs to be in your opening sentence.
Fact error -- the plane was coming from Chicago, not heading into Chicago.
ReplyDeleteAlso, what makes this story news is not just that a plane crashed, but that all 131 people on board were killed. So that information needs to be in your opening sentence.
Please try again.